The Move South

Garnet Ricks


The Move South, 1         Twilight, mid-June, 1985:
         The truck stopped.  Hissed.  Choked twice and died at the small motel just off Duval Street.  The faded sign of the establishment was a welcome a sight, just as the southernmost lighthouse beacon must have been to the many sailors arriving at Key West during the past hundred and fifty years.  The two brothers got out, stretched and looked back at the vehicle as if it was a large animal they had brought in after a hard fight.
         “So this is it huh?” asked Leslie, as if questioning his brother’s sanity.  “One thing I will say, when you go for a change, you go all the way.  This is one hell of a change from Boston.”
       Keith looked at his brother with a mischievous smile on his face.  He knew his younger and was not the sort of person easily upset with events he felt he could control.  Leslie was a large young man in his early twenties, a little over two hundred pounds, nearly half a foot taller than his brother, and with three years of college football behind him.  He had his own ideas of right and wrong, finding it hard to deviate from his opinions even when he left people with the thought that he had.
       “With Mom and Dad moving back to Bermuda and Gary solidly entrenched at Wang, it seemed like a sound decision to me,” said Keith.
       “Kicking us out of the nest was one thing, but moving the next nine hundred miles away made it sort of permanent,” said Les, and both started to laugh.
       “The foliage around her reminds me of Bermuda,” Les stated.  “The buildings look more laid back, but not bad.  I think I could hang for a while.”
       “It grows on you pretty quick,” said Keith.  “Well, let’s get you checked in.”
       Moving to the back of the truck, they took out a suitcase and went into the office.  Inside, the flora was even more robust than outside.  Besides the abundance of tropical plants, the office was full of comfortable wicker furniture with overstuffed padding.  A counter ran three-quarters the length of the room.  A young man rose up from a seat hidden from view, which made him appear to have materialized from nowhere.  The receptionist was in his late twenties or early thirties.  He was slim, with the type of chiseled features one would expect to find in Lost Angeles.  His eyes were bright and alert as a healthy park squirrel, with dimples when he smiled that would support a pencil eraser.
       “You fellows checking in, I take it,” he said, placing his hands on a computer panel sitting on the counter.  “Do you have a reservation?”
       “Yes.  I made one here last week for Leslie Ricks,” said Keith.
       “Oh, yes.  In fact, I took it myself, but I put down ‘Ms’.  My mistake,” the clerk said, but his smile left his face when he saw the stone reaction he was receiving from Leslie to his joke.
       “Please sign here, Mr. Ricks.  Will it be cash or charge?”
       “It’s be charge,” Keith stated.  “And put it on my card.”  He handed the clerk his American Express card.
       The clerk registered the card and finished the check-in.  “If you fellows will come with me, I’ll show you to your room.”  He came around the counter and looked Les up and down.  As he picked up the bag, he sucked air through his teeth, ran his fingers through his abundant hair, and walked out the door.  These actions were not lost on Leslie, and if the clerk had looked back again, it might have been a snarling animal he found.
       The action was not lost on Keith, either, as he read his brother’s face.  “Cool.  I said it was different.”  He smiled and picked up his brother’s other bag.  “After we get you settled, we’ll run down to my place and unload the truck.”
       They left the motel after changing from the travel clothes they were wearing.  Les wore a rust-colored Ban-Lon shirt and a pair of natural-colored, side-pocketed trouper trousers made of sailcloth, with red and white Air Jordan sneakers.  Keith had changed into a pair of green shorts and a tee shirt advertising Filene’s Basement of Boston, boater’s shoes, and no socks.  After a lesson in patience and an example of sheet determination, they got the truck restarted and proceeded the few blocks to Keith’s new residence.  When they arrived, Keith punched the combination into the privacy fence gate lock and opened up a section of what seemed to be a nondescript wall covered with foliage.  
        When the gate opened, however, Les found himself in an entirely new world.  The gateway was the width of a small truck, paved with white, pea-size rocks, and lighted by bulbs hidden in lobster traps.  A walkway led to a wooden-decked courtyard surrounded by individual homes that looked more like cabins, with lush, well-cultivated trees and shrubs placed between each building surrounding the courtyard.  A small swimming pool and hot tub, illuminated in the center, supplied most of the light, with the porch lights from the houses adding to it.  Several groupings of furniture were placed at random around the yard.  Three of the benches were occupied, with the people in each group chatting privately amongst themselves.  The two young men entering the yard became the immediate center of attention.
        “Hi, Keith.  I see you returned to our little Shangri-La,” said the nearest man, rising from his seat and approaching them.  He was dressed in bicycle riding pants and matching shirt, and had a smile that was contagious.
        “And who is this nice-looking young man with you?”  He must be your brother.  A little rougher around the edges, but definitely a brother.”
        Les felt uneasy about the examination he was receiving.  But he was even more upset when he noticed the hooded look he was receiving from the companion of the man speaking.  The second man got up from his seat reluctantly.  He was dressed in a blue and white flowered shirt and blue shorts, and had the physique of a gymnast.  His eyes never left Les, as if he considered him a threat.
        “Boy, it’s good to be back,” said Keith.  “That was some drive.  This is my kid brother Leslie.  Les, this is Carl Thompson and his friend Ted Ingram.  They live here on the right.”  Les shook hands with Carl and gave sort of a wave salute to Ted, who acknowledged him with a nod of his head.  “This is Bill Compton and his wife Julie.”  The couple smiled and waved a welcome.  “This big, burly character is Fred Flintwood.  We call him Bam-Bam for short.”  The big guy got up, looking like a self-propelled mortar round with hair all over and a smiling face painted on it, came over, and presented his hand.  “And this last little lady is his wife Carol.”  Carol did not get up but offered her hand.
       The door to the yard swung open and a young lady entered, closing the gate behind her.  Turning back to the yard, she noticed Keith for the first time.  Her face lit up, and she rushed forward, clinging to him like a small vine.
       “You remember my brother, Les.  He helped me drive the truck down,” said Keith, when he was able to catch his breath.  “Les, you remember Angela?”  Angela Cavanaugh was a small, thin girl, freckles on her nose, long brown hair that she wore in a pony tail hanging over the front of her shoulder, making her look much younger than her years.
       “Of course I remember Les,” she said, looking over her shoulder at him, while clinging to Keith.
       “If your truck’s outside, we can all give you a hand unloading it now,” said Carl.
       Everyone from the court helped to unload the truck.  Angela was inside directing traffic, Keith and Ted were on the truck handing down boxes, and everyone else labored at carrying them inside.  After several trips, Les decided he would stay inside to help Angela position the furniture.  Actually, he felt uneasy about being in contact with Carl any more than necessary.

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        During the traditional Duval crawl (a must for anyone visiting Key West), the two brothers, along with Angela, stopped for dinner at a restaurant on Caroline Street called Pepe’s.  It was a quaint little place frequented primarily by locals, and all the patrons seemed to know each other.  After a round of handshakes and introductions to those Keith and Angela knew, the trio was seated.
       “Boy, you sure got to know a lot of people in a couple of weeks,” Les commented.
       “I ran into Skip through the music community.  And Skip, he knows everybody, and I mean everybody,” Keith replied.
       “Half of them gay,” Angela added in a hostile tone.
       “Ange, if we’re going to live here, you’re going to have to change your attitude toward some people,” Keith spoke as if this was an ongoing disagreement.
       “You’re not my husband.  You’re my boyfriend.  I don’t change for anybody, and you should know that by now,” Angela retorted.
       “You know when I came here I felt a lot like you do, Angela.  But now that I’ve met and gotten to know some of these people during the past few days, I feel a lot more at east with them and not so much threatened, you might say.  Now I wonder why I felt that way in the first place.”
       “I’m sure glad you encouraged me to go on that back country fishing trip with the guys from the compound,” Les said.
       “I hear you were quite a hit with those guys,” Keith replied.  “I never knew you were a fly fishing expert.”
       “Well,” Les spoke in a less embarrassed manner, “it’s not much different than trout fishing, but the fish are bigger and run much harder.”
       “Well, from what I hear you gave them quite a clinic.  I’ve been hearing about it ever since,” said Keith.  
        “One thing I will say is, those shoulders of Bam-Bam’s are not false.  That guy can pole a bot like a three horsepower motor, and Ted can spot a school of fish like a hungry shark.”  As he spoke, one could hear his excitement building as he relived the trip.
       “Careful,” said Keith, “or you’ll be a conk before you know it.”  The group broke into laughter.
       “Well, it’s still not right to me,” said Angela, and the subject was dropped as dinner was served.  “I’m sorry to hear you decided to stay up north,” she added.
       “Right before I left I met a girl named Maria, and I find myself missing her.  I called her last night, and that sort of sealed it for me.”
       “I, for one, will be sorry to see you go.  With Mom and Dad in the islands, it feels like we’re caught up in that game we used to play as kids called four corner,” Keith said in a longing voice.
       “I’m surprised you’re living down here, Angela.  As I recall, you used to be afraid of the water,” Les stated.
       “I’m getting used to it now.  I can at least wade on the beach now without panicking,” Angela answered.
       The whole compound was a bustle of activity at the cookout to say good-by to Leslie.  Some were spread on towels around the pool, drinking wine or soft drinks.  Fred (Bam-Bam) Flintwood was introducing his new recipe for grilled salmon.  He had a fillet with the skin on, marinated in soy sauce, liberally coated with mayo and topped with crushed garlic, the grilled skin down on the charcoal grill.  
       “Boy, this is delicious,” said Les.  “I’ve got to remember this.  Does it work as well on other fish?”
       “Oh, yes.  I’ve tried it on grouper and fresh tuna with good results,” he answered.
       Angela was coming across the deck, carrying a plate of food, when she found herself in a spot where she either had to step over Carl or negotiate along a few inches at the edge of the pool.  Paying more attention to the couple on deck than she should have, she nearly dropped them, and in compensating to correct herself she stepped over the edge and tumbled into the water.  Panic immediately set in and, struggling, she went under.  Les jumped first in the water, without a thought that he was not a strong swimmer.  Reaching her near the bottom of the pool, nine feet down, he found himself locked in Angela’s grip, which pinned both his arms to his sides.  It did not look good, but help was not long in coming.  He found himself being pulled to the surface, and finally got a breath of fresh air as Ted towed him to the shallow end of the pool.  Panic set in again until he noticed Carl bringing Angela to the ladder.
       “Boy, I sure want to thank you guys.  I thought for a minute I was a goner,” Les said.
       “That’s what friends are for,” Carl replied, “to be there when you need them.”

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       The plane was about to leave, and they had all gathered at the airport to see Les off—Carl, Ted, Bam-Bam, Bill, and Keith.
       “I don’t know how long it will be, or even if I will return, but I will say I learned a lot here, and I’ll carry a lot of memories with me about Key West for the rest of my life.  This visit was short, but it carried a wallop.  Thank all you guys for being part of it.”
       After hugging each guy, Les went through the door of his plane, afraid to look back in case they might see the tears in his eyes.
 
Date Submitted:
2001-03-07 00:00:00
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Copyright © Garnet Ricks, 2001